Chapter 1


Dear journal, Its me Piggy, something tragic has happened.
    Me and all the other boys from school were in a plane crash. We're stranded on and island with no adults to help us survive. I've met this one boy named Ralph I told him he can call me anything except Piggy because that's what they used to call me at school and I hated it! He started laughing at me and calling me Piggy. I really hate that name.
     After getting to know Ralph he isn't a bad kid after all I kind of like him. He came up with a plan to gather all us boys with his conch and it worked. I really wish I wasn't on this island with them, they make fun of my asthma and weight and barely let me talk, why does it always have to be this way? This one boy named Jack never wants to hear what I have to say and I'm sick of it sick of all the boys treating me this way.
      We have been trapped here on the island for a couple a days an no one is worried about finding a way out. Ralph is our leader and Jack follows after. I have a bad feeling about Jack he wants everything to himself, he rather catch and kill a pig than get off the island and I don't like it. He always complains that I don't do anything but no one will ever let me... What should I do?

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  1. Lord of the Flies DominicMarch 30, 2017 at 5:50 AM

    You did a good job on voicing piggy and how he did not like to be called that. How you wrote it is perfect cause it is all in first person. I did not see any spelling or grammar errors.
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    1. lord of the flies franMarch 30, 2017 at 5:58 AM

      Great understanding of the conch shell and the symbolism of it. yes the picture did help it made the blog a little more interesting then if i was just words. Great job all together.

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  2. Lord of the Flies DaveenaMarch 30, 2017 at 5:59 AM

    The voice of the character was good, and I could tell which character you was writing about by the events that you used. I liked how you started off the blog, that was a good hook that really pulled me into reading it some more. I did see some mistakes but other than that I think you did a good job.

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  3. Lord of the Flies DanielMarch 30, 2017 at 6:02 AM

    good job doing the voice of your character. I could tell which one you wrote about. I could tell by you describe him and the events of the story. I like the way you did your blog nice job!!

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  4. Lord of the Flies GiaMarch 30, 2017 at 9:59 AM

    I liked how you used the voice in the first person. It made feel like I was the one who was stranded on the island. Excellent job!

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  5. Lord of the Flies GhaffarMarch 31, 2017 at 6:19 AM

    good job

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